# Revision Plan

## Current Draft State

- Foundation package created.
- Chapter 1 drafted.
- Chapter 1 continuity report created.
- Chapter 2 drafted.
- Chapter 2 continuity report created.
- Chapter 3 drafted.
- Chapter 3 continuity report created.
- Chapter 4 drafted.
- Chapter 4 continuity report created.
- Chapter 5 drafted.
- Chapter 5 continuity report created.
- Chapter 6 drafted.
- Chapter 6 continuity report created.
- Chapter 7 drafted.
- Chapter 7 continuity report created.
- Chapter 8 drafted.
- Chapter 8 continuity report created.
- Chapter 9 drafted.
- Chapter 9 continuity report created.
- Chapter 10 drafted.
- Chapter 10 continuity report created.
- Chapter 11 drafted.
- Chapter 11 continuity report created.
- Chapter 12 drafted.
- Chapter 12 continuity report created.
- Chapter 13 drafted.
- Chapter 13 continuity report created.
- Chapter 14 drafted.
- Chapter 14 continuity report created.
- Chapter 15 drafted.
- Chapter 15 continuity report created.
- Chapter 16 drafted.
- Chapter 16 continuity report created.
- Chapter 17 drafted.
- Chapter 17 continuity report created.
- Chapter 18 drafted.
- Chapter 18 continuity report created.
- Chapter 19 drafted.
- Chapter 19 continuity report created.
- Chapter 20 drafted.
- Chapter 20 continuity report created.
- Chapter 21 drafted.
- Chapter 21 continuity report created.
- Chapter 22 drafted.
- Chapter 22 continuity report created.
- Chapter 23 drafted.
- Chapter 23 continuity report created.
- Chapter 24 drafted.
- Chapter 24 continuity report created.
- Chapter 25 drafted.
- Chapter 25 continuity report created.
- Chapter 26 drafted.
- Chapter 26 continuity report created.
- Chapter 27 drafted.
- Chapter 27 continuity report created.
- Chapter 28 drafted.
- Chapter 28 continuity report created.
- Chapter 29 drafted.
- Chapter 29 continuity report created.
- Chapter 30 drafted.
- Chapter 30 continuity report created.
- Chapter 31 drafted.
- Chapter 31 continuity report created.
- Chapter 32 drafted.
- Chapter 32 continuity report created.
- Chapter 33 drafted.
- Chapter 33 continuity report created.
- Chapter 34 drafted.
- Chapter 34 continuity report created.
- Chapter 35 drafted.
- Chapter 35 continuity report created.
- Chapter 36 drafted.
- Chapter 36 continuity report created.
- Chapter 37 drafted.
- Chapter 37 continuity report created.
- Chapter 38 drafted.
- Chapter 38 continuity report created.
- Chapter 39 drafted.
- Chapter 39 continuity report created.
- Chapter 40 drafted.
- Chapter 40 continuity report created.

## Global Revision Watchpoints

- Keep science explanations concrete but not lecture-heavy.
- Preserve Earth-2 people as intellectually equal.
- Avoid making Kharos purely evil; keep sincere fear of cultural erasure visible.
- Keep Mira's family cost recurring through delayed message packets.
- Make each chapter deliver one irreversible change and one forward hook.

## Next Drafting Step

All 40 planned chapter drafts now exist. Next work should be expansion and revision: increase chapter depth toward the 400-page target, smooth continuity across the compressed first draft, and revise prose for scene-level richness.